Editor Jennifer Suggests: Going Deep, by Bernadette Gardner

>> Saturday, July 11, 2009



Going Deep, by Bernadette Gardner is spicy, sexy....and best of all: original.

Dr. Celia Weston Weston came to Space Station Gavrel because she was fascinated with the biogenetically engineered humanoids created to maintain the station's artificial ocean. The more she works with the UMEs (Underwater Maintenance Engineers), the more intrigued she becomes.

Strong, sleek and oh, so handsome, these aquatic humanoids have been carefully crafted to remain controllable by their human owners. But the Ley, as they have named themselves, are making plans of their own.

When Celia falls for one of the Ley, she is caught between species. Can she really forsake everything for the man she loves? Will she be allowed to?

This is a fun, fast read, and the Ley feel like a fully thought out species. I felt that one plot point (which gives away too much of the story for me to relate here) was resolved too easily. Otherwise I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

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Jennifer's fate was sealed when she aced the English portion of the SAT and received a BA in English from the University of Pennsylvania (with a concentration in Medieval Languages - Latin, Old English, Old Icelandic and a smidge of Greek). Although she briefly tried finance, child care, and even a foray into chicken farming, she couldn't escape her destiny - working with the written word.

From tutoring high school students to pass the SAT, to writing and editing copy for a distributing/manufacturing company, to teaching Latin, to writing romance novellas, to creating AudioLark Audio Books, Jennifer has used her talent for spotting mistakes to benefit employers, clients and friends.

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