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Write a good story. There’s no getting around the fact that if your novel isn’t interesting and well written, it’s not going to win.
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Get your novel critiqued several times – by real critique partners that you find through writers’ groups – not by friends or family. Discover plot problems, slow spots, and other issues, and fix them. These novels are supposed to be published, after all.
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Get your novel proofread. Once you’ve made all the changes in your novel and you’re sure it’s the best it can be, get one of your nit-picky English major friends to go through it with a fine-toothed comb. Your story might be great, and it might be published, but if I see a bunch of typos and grammatical errors, that’s ALL I will see.
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Start strong. Just like an editor at a publishing house, when the submissions stack up, I make my initial judgements based on the first five or so pages. If that. You’d better hook me right away with the quality of your writing. Don’t give me five pages of back story. I’ll be long gone.
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Show, don’t tell. Show, show, show. Look it up. Every book and website on writing covers this one.
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Be original. Editor Jennifer was the kid at school who carried ten to fifteen books home every week from the school library and then got more from the public library for the weekends. I have read just about every book in the universe. Surprise me. Please.
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FOLLOW THE RULES. I’m amazed I have to write this one, but I do. Read the rules. You are not exempt from them. No – not even you. Follow them to the letter. Remember to include your bio, your novel blurb, your cover image and a link to the website where it can be purchased. And no, you can’t send them in now – it’s too late. If I needed them, I found them online myself.
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Check the formatting of your published copies. Ebook formatting has a long way to go. Somehow, even pdf files get messed up when publishers convert them. It’s your job to check that nothing heinous has happened on page fifty – before you send it to me.
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Make sure your novel fits the contest. Subject matter, length, format...all of it needs to be appropriate.
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Keep your correspondence cheerful, not cocky. You cannot bully or intimidate me into giving you the prize. Really.